Having shown the script and storyboards to the tutors and fellow students, we came to an agreement that the project was very ambitious and likely not to be completed on time. Taking this into account I went away and have again rewritten the script making it a lot short and completely cutting out the destruction of the city.
The Film is now a Trailer and takes place in a large dessert, (where the original idea started) the city will still be destroyed, but in one go and from a far. Not completely Happy with this idea at the moment.
Even though this is not as large as the previous Idea, I can see what people were saying about the size of the project. I am not completely satisfied with this script so I will continue working on it, expect to see a new one pretty soon!